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Without Speaking

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~Without Speaking~

I've wept for those who suffer long
But how I weep for those who've gone
Into rooms of grief and questioned wrong
But keep on killing

It's in the soul to feel such things
But weak to watch
without speaking
Oh what mercy sadness brings
If God be willing

There is a train that's heading straight
To heaven's gate, to heaven's gate
And on the way, child and man,
And woman wait, watch and wait
For redemption day

Fire rages in the streets
And swallows everything it meets
It's just an image often seen
On television

Come leaders, come you men of great
Let us hear you pontificate
Your many virtues laid to waste
And we aren't listening

What do you have for us today
Throw us a bone but save the plate
On why we waited til so late
Was there no oil to excavate
No riches in trade for the fate
Of every person who died in hate
Throw us a bone, you men of great

There is a train that's heading straight
To heaven's gate, to heaven's gate
And on the way, child and man,
And woman wait, watch and wait
For redemption day

It's buried in the countryside
It's exploding in the shells at night
It's everywhere a baby cries
Freedom

Redemption Day - Sheryl Crow

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Stefani6268's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I've never seen a deviation quite like this one before. Whenever I listen to this song, I kind of picture a dark and gloomy setting. I think what caught me the most in this picture was the eye. The eye itself is very detailed in ways that make it seem supernatural. I actually still can't tell if it's a photo or a digital piece of artwork! XD The baby crying makes sense with the song, though I personally think it wouldn't fit if this were based on a different song. I think it has a great effect on the picture, however. Putting it's image in the center of the pupil is very creepy, but very creative! Overall, I thought this deviation was really good. I don't think it needs very much improvement. Well done!